Harry Potter’s Death Authority

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1. Hate it. It's like the author is forcing the MC to the plot. This book is a red flag. I like the idea of the whole plot but the how's it gonna continue if it keeps forcing the MC like ooc?!?!? His first intention in Hogwarts was to watch a new legend to be born but why do you keep out-shadowing the original protagonist?!?! Red flag. Yup. Red flag. Not gonna continue.

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2. "Chinese cultivator in Harry Potter world"

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3. Worst novel ever. Makes you hate dumbledore the big shit shit wizard and the cuck protagonist like hate hate. Watches his family die and doesnt even get angry. Eternal damnation on his soul and all likeminded

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4. Ellie almost sacrifices her life for the MC and confesess . Stil he dosent like her this is shit

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5. the idea was good at the beginning, until the author started mixing chinese things into the story, and bruh why the heck is the mc is overpowered since day 1, wtf even dumbeledore and voldemort are afraid of him? and that's the just the beginning of the story, and why would he even force a useless thing as him going to disney or something and it took like 20chapters for something that couldve ended in 2 chapters lol, and like he could erase anyone memory but they don't even suspect about them doing nothing for an hour or why they couldn't remember what happenened in that hour, and the thing that made me quit this fan-fic is the mc has a thing from his original world, that shouldn't been found in the harry potter world, but voldemort knows about it? like come OOOOOOOOOON. anyways, i just wanted to write this so the readers that wants to read it, can have a solid idea about it.

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6. YOU, have my thanks

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7. Thanks mate.. 😁 😁

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8. You Have My Thanks right now i am browsing in harry potter fanfics right this moment... :D (y)

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9. Thanks for the heads-up.

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10. I even thought about reading it but your comment saved my time

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11. Thanks

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12. Thanks for the heads up !!

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